tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7143591766928521449.post1628014737967174197..comments2023-11-22T09:20:56.603-05:00Comments on Jennifer Coyne Qudeen: 4 storiesJenniferhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10927317459104273331noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7143591766928521449.post-76156777332816255312012-01-05T06:46:40.569-05:002012-01-05T06:46:40.569-05:00Fiona - Tell! Tell!Fiona - Tell! Tell!Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10927317459104273331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7143591766928521449.post-844728259905648492012-01-05T05:39:26.277-05:002012-01-05T05:39:26.277-05:00Oh good - now I look at them and think - I can hea...Oh good - now I look at them and think - I can hear/see the story and even the little breath-stops!Fiona Dempsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09275413906419343228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7143591766928521449.post-23646438836744157662012-01-05T04:55:55.832-05:002012-01-05T04:55:55.832-05:00Fiona - Thank you! That's exactly what I was a...Fiona - Thank you! That's exactly what I was aiming for...the rhythm of the story.Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10927317459104273331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7143591766928521449.post-45286039371144877892012-01-04T23:08:02.637-05:002012-01-04T23:08:02.637-05:00There's a lovely lilting line across them all ...There's a lovely lilting line across them all now - well spotted from a glance! My eye goes along with the heavily rusted shapes now...Fiona Dempsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09275413906419343228noreply@blogger.com